I have been working on this theme for weeks, and I can't seem to make any good progress on it. I would like some strong opinions on this piece because I really need the help.
Are there things you like in this track? Things you want me to improve/redo? Should I change how some things enter? Should I add anything in? Where should I go from where it ends off near the end? Please, be as harsh as possible with critiquing, for I need it a lot.
And for what this theme is, it's a theme for the first city in Wonder's War called Imperia. It's like Bowerstone Industrial from Fable 3 if you want to go see what I'm kinda going for. Except it's kinda military like, having guards all over the city, more bright, has a waterfront, going for an army like kinda track. Which is why I have the drum beating four notes over and over again.
Once I get this track done, the demo for Wonder's War will be out. I've been working hard to make it possible, and I'm just so close to doing it. I can't wait to show what I've been working on ^^.